Dream of Winx

Dream of Winx

A free forum for all winx fans! All winxers are welcomed! Join the magic and experience it! Spread your wings and fly!
 
HomeWelcome PageCalendarFAQSearchMemberlistUsergroupsRegisterLog in
RP season


Season: Spring
Month: April
Year: 2017
Latest topics
» fun things to do this summer ideas videos
Yesterday at 6:42 pm by ★gakuenalice ★

» Thread of random discussions
Fri Jun 23, 2017 11:09 am by Dream winx

» We've moved!
Thu Jun 22, 2017 2:23 pm by Dream winx

» REG: Hospital stay
Thu Jun 22, 2017 11:29 am by cfleischmann

» Word Chain
Wed Jun 21, 2017 10:29 pm by Dream winx

» Luna's magic expirience
Wed Jun 21, 2017 9:44 pm by Dream winx

» Over The Garden Wall- Memories Lost
Wed Jun 21, 2017 9:52 am by SimplyNoone

» REG: Good News -- Nonverbal Wedding
Tue Jun 20, 2017 5:12 pm by cfleischmann

» REG: Lyrics about recent breakup "remember everyting" remix
Fri Jun 02, 2017 5:21 pm by cfleischmann

Log in
Username:
Password:
Log in automatically: 
:: I forgot my password
The Staff Team

ADMINISTRATORS

MODERATORS
Top posting users this month
Dream winx
 
★gakuenalice ★
 
cfleischmann
 
SimplyNoone
 
musa225
 

Share | 
 

 sunshine college academy new story chapter 1 courage

View previous topic View next topic Go down 
AuthorMessage
★gakuenalice ★
MagicalModerator
MagicalModerator
avatar

Fairy XP : 241
Posts : 1523
Age : 25
Location : alfea



PostSubject: sunshine college academy new story chapter 1 courage   Fri Mar 17, 2017 9:49 pm

Faith eating breakfast
"Good morning Faith.",both said Hazel and Isabella
"Good morning you two,did you both sleep well?".",said Faith
"Yes.",replies  Isabella
"I did sleep well,i dreamed about I married Jake by the blossom tree and the blossom tree leaves fell on us.I want to get married by the blossom."replies Hazel
"Why?"asks Isabelle
"Because the blossom tree pretty.",says Hazel
"Nice idea,sounds romatic.",said Faith
"Getting married by the blossom tree no one could never forget getting married there special meomory.",replies Hazel
"Im finally going to confess my feeling to Joseph.",says Faith
"Finally,yay good luck.said Isabella
"Goodluck.",smiles Hazel
"Aw thx guys.",replies Faith
Joseph is getting his lunch
"Faith look hes getting his lunch.",isabella told Faith
"Here I go.",neverous Faith
"Hi Joseph,I have something to tell you I have feelings for you I also wrote you a letter how i started to have feelings for you.heres the note.",rasped Faith
"No thx.",oozed Joseph
Faith sad because rejected her
"What made her to think to ask you out shes ugly and looks like a monkey.",Timmy
Joseph laughs about what Timmy said.

Hazel and Isabella look at each other feel bad for Faith and both said.",huh
Faith walks to the school balcony walks in a sad way
"Im going to tell Andrew for him to try to make her feel better.",replies Isabella
"Okay.",says Hazel
Faith she thinks in her head I cant believe he rejected me and he didnt even care about reading the letter i knew he was a jerk i thought atleast he would read the letter i have to move on
Faith friend Andrew cover her eyes
"Guess who it is.",said Andrew
"Brad Pitt.",replies Faith
"Lol.",says Andrew
"Hey Andrew.",said Faith
"Hey,I heard about what happend im sorry about what happend,what a jerk.",replies Andrew
"He didnt even care about reading the letter.",says Faith
"Want me to beat him up for you.",said Andrew
"Thx but that wouldnt solve anything,what stinks I cant avoid him since we in the same every class and same sport club.",replies Faith
"You find someone better then him for now forget about him lets enjoy dance class.I cant wait for dance class",says Andrew<he loves to dance
"Okay! I cant wait for dance class.",smiles Faith
Andrew and Faith hurrys up to class and run to the classroom
"Class today you guys going to learn disco dancing,take a few steps to your right left back and forward to the beat next wiggle your hips from side to side next where shake your shoulders alternating each forward and back.",said the teacher Bob
Everyone finishes disco dancing
"Good job everyone,do it one more time.",replies Bob
Joseph he stares at faith

When disco dancing Andrew and Faith accidently bump into each other and fall down they laugh about what happend

School over
"Practice what I taught you at home you guys have to do that for your dance exam.",says Bob
"That was amazing,I never expected for the class to learn disco dancing.I think no one disco anymore.",says Andrew
"Yeah agree.",Faith
"Joseph I have feelings for you will you be my boyfriend.",yak Angel
"Nope.",said Joseph<he made her cry she runs off
"How dare he makes her cry,im going to tell him off.its not cool you made her cry you could have told her in a nice way rejecting her.",said Faith
"Its none of your business what i say to her.",replies Joseph
"Listen up Joseph for now on everyday im going to make you respect people and have fun.",serious Faith
Joseph  shocked she said that
to be continued...
Back to top Go down
View user profile
SimplyNoone
MagicalModerator
MagicalModerator
avatar

Fairy XP : 263
Posts : 836
Location : I'm everywhere

PostSubject: Re: sunshine college academy new story chapter 1 courage   Sat Apr 08, 2017 4:14 am

Hey, I just realized something.

Do you know what a beta is? If not, from my basic understanding, it is someone who fixes the spelling and grammar of a story. I'd be glad to be your beta if you'd want. Of course, Ash is just as capable as me.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
★gakuenalice ★
MagicalModerator
MagicalModerator
avatar

Fairy XP : 241
Posts : 1523
Age : 25
Location : alfea



PostSubject: Re: sunshine college academy new story chapter 1 courage   Sat Apr 08, 2017 6:08 pm

no  i never knew what beta meant until you thank you no i want to get better at grammar fixing my own stories myself if i dont fix my stories on my on how im going get better at grammar i have to fix them myself if i dont fix them myself iwont get better at fixing myself  was there anything in the story you didnt understand for now on this goes for everybody if you dont understand something on my story let me know i fix it try my best to explain it good
Back to top Go down
View user profile
SimplyNoone
MagicalModerator
MagicalModerator
avatar

Fairy XP : 263
Posts : 836
Location : I'm everywhere

PostSubject: Re: sunshine college academy new story chapter 1 courage   Sat Apr 08, 2017 7:56 pm

Sometimes, you go from past tense to present, and it makes it slightly confusing at times.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
★gakuenalice ★
MagicalModerator
MagicalModerator
avatar

Fairy XP : 241
Posts : 1523
Age : 25
Location : alfea



PostSubject: Re: sunshine college academy new story chapter 1 courage   Sat Apr 08, 2017 8:53 pm

i dont undestand what you meant
Back to top Go down
View user profile
SimplyNoone
MagicalModerator
MagicalModerator
avatar

Fairy XP : 263
Posts : 836
Location : I'm everywhere

PostSubject: Re: sunshine college academy new story chapter 1 courage   Sat Apr 08, 2017 10:49 pm

'Says' is basically being the present, basically
'Said' is past tense, meaning it can be the main word for everytime someone speaks in stories of times past (or, in example: Harry EXPLODED in rage as he GROWLED at the frizzy haired girl, his emerald green eyes held anger that at one point, had almost KILLED someone)
Back to top Go down
View user profile
★gakuenalice ★
MagicalModerator
MagicalModerator
avatar

Fairy XP : 241
Posts : 1523
Age : 25
Location : alfea



PostSubject: Re: sunshine college academy new story chapter 1 courage   Sun Apr 16, 2017 12:59 pm

oh i get better at not doing that anymore
Back to top Go down
View user profile
 
sunshine college academy new story chapter 1 courage
View previous topic View next topic Back to top 
Page 1 of 1
 Similar topics
-
» Bernkastel's Story: Chapter 1
» The use of cosmetics at Garderobe Academy [Mai-Otome]
» My first Schleich key-ring, and a great sunshine-story :-D
» The Beginning of the N: Chapter 1
» The Story of Orichalcos Duel Academy

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
Dream of Winx :: Creativity :: Non-winx club related-
Jump to: